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Skating on Saturns rings contest, sponsor Sara Jama 17/2 /25 If I were a being with angel wings I’d go skating on Saturn’s rings I’d glide along as on thin ice I think that that would feel so nice If I were that being I’d fly very far As far and far as the evening star I’d bathe in the warmth of her silver light I think that that would feel just right Then off I would go to visit Mars To collect some magic in mason jars For the magic of mars is old redwood I think that that would feel real good I’d visit all the spheres in the dark night sky To see wondrous worlds before I die I’d land on each, the hot and cold I think that that would feel very bold We’re allowed to dream, it is our right So when I go to bed at night I dream about amazing things Like Mars and moons and Saturns rings

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