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Sun is shining as I sing my redemption song. Hey lady, no woman no cry, lets spread one love. Jammin', spreading positive vibrations so strong, like three little birds easy skanking with a dove. Hey lady, no woman no cry, lets spread one love, turn your lights down low and dance like a soul rebel, like three little birds easy skanking with a dove. Don't be waiting in vain, let all your fears repel. Turn your lights down low and dance like a soul rebel, get up, stand up, stir it up, satisfy my soul. Don't be waiting in vain, let all your fears repel, exodus of emotions will make you feel whole. Get up, stand up, stir it up, satisfy my soul, shout I shot the sheriff, but not his deputy. Exodus of emotions will make you feel whole, feel like a buffalo soldier finally free. Shout I shot the sheriff, but not his deputy. Iron like a zion mind will help your hopes soar, feel like a buffalo soldier finally free, escaping from a concrete jungle full of war. Iron like a zion mind will help your hopes soar, feeling you finally could be loved as doubts cease. Escaping from a concrete jungle full of war, mind no longer questions is this love when in peace. Feeling you finally could be loved as doubts cease, Jammin', spreading positive vibrations so strong, mind no longer questions is this love when in peace. Sun is shining as I sing my redemption song. Silent One 2 April 2018
Challenged by Maria Williams A pantoum using 22 song titles by Bob Marley, listed below. Each line is 12 syllables. No woman no cry Three little birds Sun is shining One love Could you be loved Buffalo soldier War Iron like zion Get up, stand up Waiting in vain Concrete jungle Stir it up I shot the sheriff Is this love Redemption song Satisfy my soul Exodus Jammin' Turn your lights down low Positive vibrations Easy skanking Soul rebel Buffalo Soldier The title and lyrics refer to the black U.S. cavalry regiments, known as "Buffalo Soldiers", that fought in the Indian Wars after 1866. Marley likened their fight to a fight for survival, and recasts it as a symbol of black resistance. The origin of the term "Buffalo Soldier" is theorised as given to black troops by Native Americans, who thought African Americans' hair felt and looked like a buffalo's pelt. The name was embraced by the troops, who were well acquainted with "the buffalo's fierce bravery and fighting spirit" Easy Skanking A form of dancing originating in Jamaica, now most notably done in Ska/Reggae shows A rare form of poetry. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next. This pattern continues for any number of stanzas, except for the final stanza, which differs in the repeating pattern. The first and third lines of the last stanza are the second and fourth of the penultimate; the first line of the poem is the last line of the final stanza, and the third line of the first stanza is the second of the final. Ideally, the meaning of lines shifts when they are repeated although the words remain exactly the same: this can be done by shifting punctuation, punning, or simply recontextualizing. It does not have to rhyme nor have a syllable restriction.

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Date: 1/1/2020 4:54:00 PM
Happy New Year, Silent One. This was fun to read. Bob Marley brings the sunshine and your creativity shines through.
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Date: 4/4/2018 10:50:00 AM
Very cosmic tribute, SO! You serve your pantoum specialty well. Another sumptuous treat for a hungry eye PSouper. Love and joy always.
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:11:00 PM
Jammin <3. You have me dancin ;)
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 5:01:00 PM
Thanks Yaz... Keep on dancing..
Date: 4/3/2018 6:13:00 AM
Very nicely done Silent..
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Joseph..
Date: 4/3/2018 2:38:00 AM
It's a true positive vibrations...
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:58:00 PM
Yes he was the man for that..
Date: 4/3/2018 2:05:00 AM
Excellent and an outstanding pantoum. Very cleverly done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thank you Ravi..
Date: 4/2/2018 11:16:00 PM
Word! ;)
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Becca Teagan
Date: 4/4/2018 12:12:00 AM
:D
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:53:00 PM
Ya man!
Date: 4/2/2018 8:23:00 PM
Just unbelievable how you can DO this!!! Another amazingly constructed Pantoum. This form is beyond my skill level and I humbly bow down to your mastery of this difficult style. Wow!!! ~Judy
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Judith, I am sure with you talent, you can master this...
Date: 4/2/2018 6:08:00 PM
Very clever, Silent, just goes to show how many quality songs he wrote, well done. Regards. viv.
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:52:00 PM
Yeah he was da man! Thanks viv...
Date: 4/2/2018 6:00:00 PM
Is there anything you can't work into words, Silent One?
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:50:00 PM
Yes, lots... Thank you..
Date: 4/2/2018 1:50:00 PM
Wow ZZ! Kudos to you for even attempting this difficult challenge. And, you sure stepped up to it. Interesting and educational for sure. I love Reggae.
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Carole..
Date: 4/2/2018 1:22:00 PM
Captivating! Dear Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:28:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 4/2/2018 10:43:00 AM
Excellent Pantoum, Silent One, I like the way you used the titles. Have a wonderful day Hugs dear friend ~`*
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Eve..
Date: 4/2/2018 10:17:00 AM
Hi Si; I really enjoyed this post. I learned a lot. Your writing is extraordinarily brilliant! And it is a great treasure you possess, that genuine nature to share with others your very precious time and valuable talents. Have a great day my friend!
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Joe, that is a great compliment..
Date: 4/2/2018 9:34:00 AM
Fabulous stuff!!! Peace brotha! <3
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:17:00 PM
Peace out sista!
Date: 4/2/2018 8:33:00 AM
Oh I love Bob Marley as you know, and I particularly set him as a challenge, because I thought I'd test you to the limit. Lol should have known better! How you pulled this little gem off in next to no time at all completely blows me away. Bob Marley will be proud. Well I will have to take back my last review on your Diana Ross one. This one is "your best'. Bravo and a fave....Maria ;)
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:16:00 PM
What ever tickles your fancy Jack :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/2/2018 10:40:00 AM
Never heard of sharing SO??? C'mon!!!
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Maria Williams
Date: 4/2/2018 8:39:00 AM
Had to chuckle at Jack's remark, don't worry Mr Williams is in on the joke.Lol....Maria ;)
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Maria, to be honest it was the easiest. It is all about how the titles are contextualised.. However, fitting in Buffalo soldier and I shot the sheriff was a challenge.. Thank you for the inspiration.. I have a contest on it now..
Date: 4/2/2018 8:16:00 AM
- A wonderful writing, S.O. ... many songs I had forgotten by Bob Marley ... I listened a lot to his music in my youth :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 8:18:00 AM
He really knows how to lift the spirits, hope you keep jammin'
Date: 4/2/2018 8:12:00 AM
Oh this is such an upbeat and cheerful song I feel like getting up and dance... I just love it, and a fave. Thank you my dear for this :)
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 8:18:00 AM
Dance easy skanking, you will love it.. Dance and music inspires the soul to smile.. Thanks Kina..
Date: 4/2/2018 8:07:00 AM
WOW, another GREAT one Silent One so interesting and so much fun !!!
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Mike, this one was so much easier than the Diana Ross once, due to the contextualisation of the song titles..
Date: 4/2/2018 7:43:00 AM
Brilliant , love a bit of reggae , yeah man. When we came back from the Caribbean we had a rum and reggae party, wore my dreadlocks attached to a hat bought in Jamaica. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 7:46:00 AM
Now I would have loved to see you in dreadlocks... Thanks Tom..
Date: 4/2/2018 7:12:00 AM
Lovely tribute, SO. Bob would be appreciative.
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Line..
Date: 4/2/2018 7:04:00 AM
No other like old Mr. Marley!!! Unique, so relaxing, so islandy! BTW, must thank you again for introducing me to Miss Williams! We are currently in the middle of a raging inferno of a love affair! I owe you!!!!!!!
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Silent One
Date: 4/3/2018 4:17:00 PM
Yeah, he is worse than Benny Hill....
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Becca Teagan
Date: 4/2/2018 11:16:00 PM
You cheatin on me, Jack? :P
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/2/2018 10:16:00 AM
LOL LUCKY MAN!!!!!!!
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 7:05:00 AM
Hahaha Jack, I think her husband might have something to say about that, as it is Mrs Williams... So lets get Jammin' Jack, you got your banjo ready?
Date: 4/2/2018 7:01:00 AM
Another splendid rendering..Maria will be happy with your tribute..keep writing Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, have a contest on it, I am sure you will be able to write a great one..
Date: 4/2/2018 6:54:00 AM
Island poetry...beach and coconut trees...in phrases while herbs of words swirl the pages... This Caribbean man changed the world of music...All the best SO...I had a feeling Maria was in the sea somewhere here...
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Silent One
Date: 4/2/2018 6:56:00 AM
Yeh maan! From all the musical pantoums I have done, this was the most enjoyable and easiest to put together.. Thanks for the visit.. Have a contest on this form, give it a go..

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