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Poetic Form: Other/Poi
Inspired: 2024 April 27
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Anybody, can't see? *It's..., me here. Who? *It's..., me. Me? Me where? *This Mulberry's cabin? He's in there...? *It's, his friend. Sydney..., it's somebody? Don't you start-in!

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/28/2024 4:16:00 PM

another creative piece of poetry...a surprisingly intriguing poetic form

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/28/2024 5:08:00 PM

I shared with Lasaad my submission for its copyrights, it's hard enough. Finding a 3-letter Word is hard, and rpm and mph aren't words. Art...'s and prep...'s are heading out the door. Limits 3 words per, hence, known hyphenations, not made-up sorts. BTW, I'm almost done with my contest if it weren't for the POTW, which I sent TPS a msg, all the oddities of recent|Woody noted--bird lands at medoor

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/28/2024 12:35:00 PM

A delightful exchange between two souls, William, and the form flows effortlessly with a constraint on syllable count, 633, 363, and 336. Feel free to correct me if I err.

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/28/2024 1:49:00 PM

Oh, that would be a bit of challenge, Lasaad, syllable counts, --Mercy. I thought the rhyme scheme and word limits per line, title incl., --best a quick kill. I've submitted for its copyrights, that should spare aplenty from begging Spartacus for aid. Thank you my friend, Aloha, William