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It Happened On a Rainy Night

(A collaboration with Charles Messina) Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at lovers park. They sizzled and sparked like a firework display The world around them faded away. Transported to another place, Locked inside their warm embrace.

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Andy Chunn

Date: 9/9/2023 7:44:00 PM

Sounds like the rain could not dampen the romance. Congrats on your win!

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 9/9/2023 10:17:00 PM

Thanks Andy, congrats on yours too. Your verse is brilliant:-D

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/8/2023 5:41:00 PM

Dear Natasha, the beauty of your romantic imagery captures the transcendent nature of love so eloquently. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 9/9/2023 12:08:00 AM

Thank you Susan. It was a lovely contest. Nice idea to make a Collab. Warm wishes to you too :-D x

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/8/2023 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Natasha! Your collaboration really does sizzle and transport the lovers into a world of their own. Blessings to you!

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 9/8/2023 12:39:00 PM

Hello Sam, thank you. It was a lovely contest. Looking forward to seeing Charles complete Collab looks like it will be great :-D