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Is It a Fantasy

If I give my love to you And this is no fantasy Promise me you will be true Darling why are you so blue Don’t deny your ecstasy When I give my love to you After all that we’ve been thru Don’t give up so easily Promise me you will be true Our love we can renew Cast away your misery When I give my love to you Sometimes we may go askew But our ship will sail this sea If we both will remain true Friends and lovers are too few But this is no fantasy If I give my love to you Promise me you will be true Someone tell me If it’s easy being A lover and a friend? This is a villanelle with a questionku.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/3/2013 6:40:00 PM
Actually this is not a terzanelle so I'll have to remove it from Richard Lamoureux competition.
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Date: 1/3/2013 5:18:00 AM
not all the time MICHAEL,sometimes the road gets a little ruff,but with love you will conquer,great write
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Michael Dom
Date: 1/3/2013 6:31:00 PM
cheers Richard.
Date: 1/2/2013 7:48:00 AM
Interesting.
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