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Into the Fold

Comfortably tucked down into the fold, there in a pocket down near the crease. Out of the wind and the rain and the cold, resting in him, strivings now cease. Joining with others into the fold; enmity once, now sisters and brothers. Oh, to be held! A thing to behold. Calm and serene at the sound of his voice; hearing his calling never gets old. According to plan, all by his choice, nestled down snug, into the fold. —————- Another Fold: 11 lines, odd lines rhyming, with common tail for 1, 5, 11

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Date: 1/18/2023 2:09:00 AM
This has a curious cadence that I want to copy
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Date: 1/15/2023 6:07:00 PM
Gotta know when to hold 'em, and know when to fold 'em.
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Date: 1/15/2023 11:56:00 AM
A creative write. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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