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Instinct March 29, 2014 Instinct Destination aimless love floating like a fragile butterfly scrutinizing surfaces on which to safely alight. Between the terrestrial and the celestial discerningly; My love hoovers beaming in on a familiar stream of light. Another traveler circling same time; Together we land in a poppy field; Allowing ourselves this time, perhaps to trust happenstance.

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Date: 5/12/2014 10:13:00 PM
A very dreamy verse! [terrestrial and earth.] I think you mean the celestial and earth ... because terrestrial means of earth so you're saying earth twice? Light & Love
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 5/12/2014 10:29:00 PM
Great catch Debbie ... will you be my muse... lol thanks.
Date: 3/29/2014 3:06:00 PM
Instinct, my dear Vicki, is knowledge stored by nature in the innermost part of our soul that our conscious is not aware of! Beautiful images floating between celestial and terrestrial reality! Very well done!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/2/2014 7:04:00 AM
I am not an expert on categories BUT this one I would place in FREE VERSE category!
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 4/1/2014 11:08:00 PM
IS THIS POEM IN ANY PARTICULAR CATEGORY ?

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