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Two estranged species of flora bud in shared soil Where a photosynthetic dazzle prompts emotional pollination By any other color, an infestation is unaffected, The inspired beauty falls away and wilts beyond time A dance in a determined wind, Storms of petals reach from the meadow across the hill While the symphony of daybreak’s mysticism awakens the world, A faded flower entangles itself in a foreign stem The smaller soon enough towers in its own right What deformation can present itself in an aftermath? There is no forest obscuring the breeze, For a dandelion dubbed a weed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/5/2015 5:19:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Dylan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2015 4:48:00 PM
Dylan,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:33:00 AM
welcome to soup Dylan very good pen for your first poem here. You will find the more you comment on other poets the more they will comment on your poems. Again welcome and keep writing hugs
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:50:00 PM
Thank you for the advice.

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