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Inside the Middle Kingdom

31/10/18 Beneath a pale sky of bleakest white, Songs carried by the eastern wind, The faint sounds of flutes and lesser known cries, Reveal a surface less skimmed. The slowest of flicks by a wise older wrist, With contentment despite all the noise, A story to tell at the call of five bells, Displaying of true grace and poise. Manicured plants, slow songs and arts, Early Sundays a skew, To walk on this road, a foreign mind wanders, To feel one of only a few. This once was a place of long pondered dreams, Of esthetic smoke screens, Of mystery wonder and awe, Now shrouded behind bureaucratic decline, Can China be China once more?

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Date: 6/20/2024 6:08:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/2/2018 8:59:00 PM
Hello Ben you have created a beautiful written poem enjoyable to read. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/16/2018 8:36:00 AM
Wonderfully done. Evocative penning. Congratulations on your win Ben! xomo
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Date: 11/15/2018 11:27:00 PM
I see you are brand new to this Poetry site. Let me extend my welcoming hand Ben. I look forward to reading more or your poetry. : )
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Date: 11/15/2018 11:24:00 PM
From beginnng to end this is absolutely beautiful Ben! Congratulations on your wonderful win. This gem is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo
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Date: 11/15/2018 8:31:00 PM
What a beautifully captured zen life vision. Hard to imagine ongoing political conflict where the recipe for peace seems within reach. Congrats on your well deserved win, Ben.
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Date: 11/3/2018 6:19:00 AM
Great one! I really enjoyed the feeling that you put into it
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Date: 11/1/2018 10:27:00 AM
Beautifully written. I am glad you have joined PoetrySoup. Welcome!
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