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In This House

...youth’s awakening eyes witnessed the loss of heritage of light. Shadows constantly calling, bringing a nearness to the secretive night. A surge of crimson droplets - a soothing sense of control of fears. Still, a darkness grows, devouring hopes, over many years. A purgatory of shame, leaves a gasp for an agony of death. Pelting rain and howling winds, fill the chambers and captures ones breath. The storm keeps raging - birthing a bolstering darkness. Pain: Persistent. Paralyzing a mind leaking what is broken. Quivering, in a darkening dream I lay - alone. Shadows, still, calling me home. Leaving me to rot, reprieve - to atone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/3/2018 9:00:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Juanita.
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Juanita Oosthuizen
Date: 11/3/2018 10:50:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/31/2018 2:12:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Juanita. I liked this part especially well: "Pain: Persistent. Paralyzing a mind leaking what is broken." Very soul-fully written.
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Juanita Oosthuizen
Date: 10/31/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/31/2018 8:30:00 AM
Beautiful rhythms. Haunting.
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Juanita Oosthuizen
Date: 10/31/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you!

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