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In the Webbed Silence

In the webbed corners of my brain There blooms a sinister flower Its petals dripping with venom And thick roots entwined with despair Begins with a taste, a mere sip The madness will soon take control Shades mix into a motley form Trapping me in its tapestry This poison, deceptive and cruel Cautiously seeps through fragile veins The vicious hiss in the bloodstream A symphony of masked decay My heart, once steadily beating Now flutters erratically The rhythm, a jarring alarm Of an anguished plea for release Grim thoughts flip and pull and coil Like serpents locked in fierce battle Slick fangs sinking deep into flesh feeding on doubt and self-loathing My mind becomes a labyrinth With narrow walls closing in tight Echoing with hollow laughter As reasoning stumbles and falls The toxins muddle my vision Showing phantoms that can’t be real Bleak faces contorted in sin My eyes can still see in the night In this twisted waltz of fester Afflicted, I writhe and convulse muted screams swallowed by the void All essence fading from within As I’m left consumed just beyond A fractured wit seeks to find peace Until my soul is laid to rest In bare sighs of forgotten dirt
*I wrote this poem on January 31, 2024, as part of a ’30 days of poetry’ January challenge. This was day 31 and the prompt was: Describe something toxic and its effects on a person. This poem delves into the darkness of mental illness, portraying the effects of toxic thoughts and inner turmoil. It is a reflection of the pain and disintegration that can occur within my mind.

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Date: 3/19/2024 7:08:00 AM
Hello Courtney, I liked how this is a haunting portrayal of our internal struggles, where darkness entangles the mind and despair takes root. Your imagery evokes a visceral sense of entrapment, the poison of negative thoughts seeping into every crevice of the soul. The poem's cadence mirrors the chaotic dance of the mind, a battle between sanity and madness. It's the fragility of mental health and the relentless grip of inner demons. Your words offer peace to those navigating similar shadows. I loved the exploration of the human psyche. - Blessings, Daniel
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