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In The Waiting Room

Let me introduce myself My name is suicide I live in the shadows Just at the back of your mind You’ll probably never meet me Sometimes I'm on posters Usually in your doctor’s waiting room You may glance at me Put me to the back of your mind That continuous cough Your main concern today Sure you’ll get better soon Now we come to the other guy I’m at the forefront now Doesn’t seem to be any alternatives No introduction needed No explanation required Sometimes we have a trial run Just to see But really, our mind is made up The poster stares right at him Taunting, asking what he’s thinking What is he thinking The same thoughts as yesterday The day before yesterday Today Tomorrow The cough would have responded to antibiotics But it was never really about the cough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/20/2024 12:59:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet very sad write/story. The brother of a friend just tried this. He did not make it but now has no eye sight. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away........
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Paul Bell
Date: 5/22/2024 6:23:00 AM
Bloody sad out there for some now.
Date: 5/20/2024 3:15:00 AM
It's sad so many people are taking their lives. I knew people that sadly went to soon.
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Paul Bell
Date: 5/20/2024 10:00:00 AM
Yeah, too much pressure out there now.
Date: 5/16/2024 8:57:00 AM
personifying suicide is an original angle on this sad subject, and those last two lines pack a punch
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Paul Bell
Date: 5/16/2024 1:17:00 PM
Sad reality for more and more now.
Date: 5/12/2024 7:06:00 AM
A dark and deep poem about a sad reality.. I wrote about suicide also and how the silence speaks so loudly..
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Paul Bell
Date: 5/13/2024 8:58:00 AM
Too many heading in that direction now.

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