In the Savannah

We had to make a dash from- rhinos in a crash

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Farah Chamma

Date: 10/30/2008 4:34:00 PM

ha! Great write and what seems like a great experience...Thank you for sharing :) TYOne, Farah

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/27/2008 11:41:00 AM

Well that must be an unforgettable experience. Yikes. Scary. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/27/2008 10:44:00 AM

I would have love to see the herd of them running along. I can close my eyes and see this clearly and the mad dash that ensued. Great short, effective write.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/27/2008 5:24:00 AM

Yes, one must watch for those rhino's - they'll swallow you whole! Yikes, a chilling poem. Love Kristin