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In Passing

In Passing Below, old age and loneliness, One slow step at a time, Makes her way home. Gnarled held shopping, Frail and thin, Not seeing those who bustle past Who, likewise, look right through Themselves in times to come. A fading shadow echoes every move, Anchored to her care worn shoes That may have walked this way A thousand times before Alone. Past riven flags, Muted ochre's all, Crazed and cracked with weathered joints. Her face, reflected up from windows past Belie a youth she carries still That none can feel, Or see, Or ever know.

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Date: 12/11/2020 1:59:00 PM
I'm glad I didn't read this one first. Now you've made an old man cry. You've captured in a few words the spirit that dwells in the hearts and minds of elders I know. Thank you for sharing this with all the soup to read. oldbuck
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Tim Riding
Date: 12/11/2020 3:06:00 PM
Wrote it looking out of a coffee shop....made me sad as it is on it's way for me...Tim

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