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In My Days

In my days I been thinking, only thinking of you I was lost, spent out a gonner Rub off something from your shoes I have lent My soul and holy What did I become, my dear friend Just sitting at the panes Thinking of you Should I have to let you go No, because I only think, think of you You are mine Only in hopes, hopes and dreams Never met you Though I pretend I pull the covers all over me The cat will whisper only to hope When will I see you in my dreams Holy hell lies Deep in my throat Don’t unlash, don’t coat me in lonely Rub against my turn And forever once again In my days , I have seen and still so lonely Looking for you In the misty hope Another thrown into the wind In my days, I’m still worried Looking, looking For you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/8/2011 5:24:00 AM
Not really my cup of tea - I found this poem quite disjointed, verse 5 for instance, doesn't really make a great deal of sense - the last two verses sum up well - keep on writing!
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