In July: Small Begins Mightily

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*Image of Small Beginnings by iStock. In JULY: Small Begins Mightily This is July's marks, Fall takes a breather, so cat hiss, dog bark, who'd backed off--neither, Fall takes a breather, this is July's marks, who'd backed off--neither, so cat hiss, dog bark. A rare sorta scene, a Christmas tree lot, what if they're closed, Irene, let's ask what they've got, a Christmas tree lot, a rare sorta scene, let's ask what they've got, what if they're closed, Irene? Kids clinched, yes sweetheart, as dog barks, cat hiss, 'Tis keepsakes take part my good sir, and miss, as dog barks, cat hiss, kids clinched, yes sweetheart, My Good sir and miss, 'tis keepsakes take part. A buck for the small, twenty for the big, we'll return when tall, a buck for that twig, twenty for the big, a buck for the small, a buck for that twig, we'll return when tall. 2022 July 30 *4th Place* Christmas in July or July Celebration ~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2022 August *Rhyme Reversal RZ aabb, ccdd, eeff, gghh. HMS 10 syllables per 16 lines.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/12/2022 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A Creative/Fun~write/picture. Poor little tree you need to grow tall/strong. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2022 3:17:00 PM

Hehe, Paula, 'twas a fun write to say the least my friend, Aloha~Williak

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/11/2022 10:36:00 AM

William, very, very creative and unique. This poem reflects both your passion for writing poetry and the time you took to craft this very original poem. Congratulations for your win! Blessings!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/11/2022 11:06:00 AM

Not many tree lots are opened in July for that reason. Size matters, Sam, as any month is game, so I thought? Aloha my friend~William

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/11/2022 6:56:00 AM

William, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/11/2022 7:00:00 AM

Thanks, Tania. Enjoy your day, Aloha~William

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/30/2022 2:49:00 PM

Wonderful! Hope its a winner. God bless you. Love, Gina

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/30/2022 3:00:00 PM

Thanks, Gina, for your praises and encouragement my friend, Aloha~William