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In at the bleep end

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When there is yellow in the pool Stick with me and observe the rule Keep right out of that space Please don't stick in your face I'll leave you to it, you fool

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Karen Jones

Date: 7/24/2024 7:40:00 PM

Hahaha good one!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/24/2024 11:29:00 PM

Thank you Karen :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/24/2024 7:23:00 PM

LOL!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/24/2024 11:29:00 PM

Thanks :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/24/2024 2:17:00 PM

When there’s yellow in the pool, don’t try be cool, promise I’ll try remember that on holidays, actually no! maybe I’ll try to forget about it, otherwise I’d never get in, ok a compromise I’ll get in and keep my head out of the water, nice Limerick Dilly, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/24/2024 11:09:00 PM

In retrospect, your reply has a deeply philosophical element for participating in life in general :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/24/2024 2:32:00 PM

Haha - how are you so naturally funny ;)

Chris Con

Date: 7/24/2024 12:55:00 PM

Duly noted.