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In a Realm of Consciousness

I'm not a shapeshifter or a drifter searching for a home, one who's weary of roaming like a song on the wind that no ears can hear except for mine alone. I'm not a gypsy cursed by a binding spell, but worse, one who seems not able to move as time passes by. I'm in a realm of consciousness, spiritually tethered to life, but filled with a sense of being alone and disconnected. I feel somewhat rejected from others of the same ilk, unable to emerge from a maze where each turn ends in strife, or wrapped in the webbing of spider spun silk. There is no suffering in this place, this space where I exist. I hesitate to call it a journey, perhaps it's understood best if I describe it as a relocation or a transient quest. Did some twist of fate lead me through a dark tunnel where there's an illuminated path waiting for me to take? It's blurred, but I have the vision that it's not a prison, but I'm sitting in Zen position, inside an opaque shell, immersed in perceptual thoughts, where sapience starts. At once I understood that my life is interwoven with others. That shell, like a balloon, burst and I was awed in oneness with the Earth, awakened as though I'd just discovered a universe where spiritual acceptance hovers like clouds. I recovered my cognitive faculties... what will be, will be. Not the que sera, sera kind found in lyrical song. One that everyone hears, a harmonic symphony of souls. Much clearer now, there are sights and sounds, a different kind of oneness that left me vacuous as before. This one is substantially more essential. It's more real, for I feel a certain kind of camaraderie, an urgent zeal that appeals to me to belong, to be one with something that lies over the threshold of an opened door. December 2, 2022 ~ Journey Without Movement Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 12/13/2022 11:05:00 AM
Jenna, congratulations on your win. I love your imagery especially the reference to the shape shifter, and the message over the open door. All the best. Blessings!
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Date: 12/6/2022 7:15:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your reflections, wisely expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 12/5/2022 7:58:00 PM
An absolutely marvellous write, Jenna! Warmest congratulations on your podium finish. A soul stirring poem indeed. Thank you for sharing.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/6/2022 8:48:00 AM
Thank you for honoring my lines with a placement in your contest, Seeker. Grateful that I somehow touched upon your expectations.
Date: 12/3/2022 5:59:00 AM
Jenna, I think your so clearly nailed the intention! What a perfect entry for this contest! The images that you created took me along with you!! A great piece xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/3/2022 7:42:00 AM
Goon morning, Mike. Thank you for understanding what my lines were meant to express. I wasn't sure I'd made it clear, not even to myself, so your kind comments are appreciated. Thanks so much.
Date: 12/2/2022 8:23:00 AM
Fine writing, Jenna. I pictured myself in segments of your images. I think Unseeking Seeker will like your poem. Good luck in his contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2022 8:45:00 AM
If I could've put myself in a trance, I might be more confidant of what I should've written, but this is the route my mind took. Thanks ever so much, Milt.
Date: 12/2/2022 8:18:00 AM
Just closing our eyes and letting our minds take over frees our spirit to Soar and transport us to magical places. Brilliant write Jenna, have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. I hope yours will be equally lovely.
Date: 12/2/2022 6:38:00 AM
Love especially the last verse. Hearing your heart… xoxo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2022 7:09:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for liking this one, Kim.

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