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Immortal

“Love wishes to perpetuate itself. Love wishes for immortality”. - Mortimer Adler I feel my soul is carried away by the tide of time from my being transiently rooted in the present to the distant desolate island where I was once, but left it forever. That’s the fading past receding fast, but yet to be abandoned and obliterated. I trace the shifting shadow of the furtive future, configuring the image of illusive love, that time carries as the mesmerizing mirage across the desert landscape life has designed in mind, where dwells the aspiration of perpetuity with the dormant dream of immortality. I perceive the entrancing undying memory, revive from the receptive recess of the past as the flying bird of my liberated love, that soars with my present in your sky, and spreads the dreaming wings to embrace the lasting happiness in the halcyon horizon of future. I drift with the essence of the imperishable soul, sailing in the sublime sea of eternity, and steered by the congenial wind of unabated love, blowing on the sanguine sail of desire, I wish to get from the stalled time's generosity, the surreal gift of being immortal. ________________ March 1, 2023 Word chosen : Immortal Contest : Writing Challenge - I Words Sponsored by : Constance La France

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:25:00 PM
Subimal, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/3/2023 7:43:00 PM
A lovely write on “the surreal gift of being immortal” Subimal. Congratulations on your success in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 3/2/2023 1:41:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Subimal ... your vision of eternal life sailing in the sublime sea of eternity ... without doubt a top winning poem ...:) - hugs
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