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The fog lay muffling the greenery gray. Weighing down the atmosphere, sentient sorrowing, with the benevolent masking intent of Gaia’s heart. Dampening, the forceful sound; the torrent of the Mothers tears; battering only the granite walls of her womb. The indistinct tone hid a multiplicity of sin both visual and auditory, keening. The cloak covered a miasma of valley-trapped pollution, engulfing the optical plane; creating a haven of rampant peacefulness. Life immersed in the cleansing, the sorrow, the joy of the universal gift bows in adulation of the effluent and affluent beauty absorbing the storms C tonal ring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/14/2009 10:33:00 PM
It is beautiful, more than words.... to comment on this, one needs to write a reply-poem for this. I wish I could, but I dont think I can match your intelligence. It is, indeed, a great work!!!!!
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Date: 6/14/2009 12:22:00 AM
Your L1 one is a beautiful poem/picture in itself Debbie.Thank you for your welcome comments on my poeting today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/10/2009 3:44:00 PM
A reply on your comment: The Amerikan Haiku Association does not advise modern contemporary haikus in English to follow the 5-7-5 scheme. It need not be about nature. Google it ^_^
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Date: 6/10/2009 1:19:00 PM
AWESOME WRITE AS ALWAYS---------CHARMA
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