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I'M Sorry About British Columbia

I’M SORRY ABOUT BRITISH COLUMBIA Sorry but I can’t see much nice about BC Us prairie boys like skies blue, not cloudy And our landscapes flatter and taughter Than those wild mountains of ocean water. All those moving waves in English Bay Look to me as if they are coming my way. And so many trees they just litter the beach. In the plains we only need a few beech. BC transport is not a fast mover And music on the ferry could be louder Especially from Victoria to Vancouver - But it does serve the world’s best clam chowder. Yes I give poetic credit when it’s due And it happens in my verse plenty of times. But how can I write nice poems, BC, for you When places like Tsawwassen have no rhymes?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/22/2010 1:06:00 PM
No need to rearrange it. I just commented what it should be my way of expressing. You are doing good. You are always welcome, Sydney
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