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If I Had Nothing and My Nothing

I would love to see 'nothing' Just a curious little thought, For example Imagine if I was given a wish By God I can ask for anything I want So, I ask for 'nothing' And I will be given nothing So I will have nothing But, what will be it's color? And what about it's shape? How will it feel? Like nothing? Oh wait! I do have nothing It is in my bank's safe

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Date: 8/20/2023 8:40:00 PM
Hahahaha! ... We must have the same bank safe! ... I also have 'more nothing' in my refrigerator. (That's because I ate it all, and now I'm 'really something!) ~ Fat Man
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 8/20/2023 9:31:00 PM
I can relate in both ways! Thanks for commenting on my work :-)
Date: 8/18/2023 8:32:00 AM
No it's not my bank's safe It's my heart's gap The one I tried to hide For my sanity's sake Which is now overpouring emotions On a stranger's comment page Nothing Could have been worse than this
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 8/18/2023 6:36:00 PM
Your openness is brave. Sharing feelings in public takes courage. Remember, we all experience vulnerability. You're stronger than you think :-)

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