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Does little nightingale say the cause of her song? I write; I do not know how long my voice will gong; Does the peacock ask a favor from you to dance? Don't all wild, when needed, their little mite enhance? I thought, I will write to change this world; I was wrong; Who reads these-days? Especially poetic song; Does the elephant fail to trumpet when needed? Poems, from time immemorial, proceeded...! Pigs know, before time, appearance of the earthquake, Crows caw before a guests steps in a little home; When an eagle can any sleeping person awake, Can't a poet, at-least, in his memories roam...? Buds bloom; nectar secretes; bees and flies fly around, Should not a poet, ultimately, make his sound? 01 September 2022 I write because Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 11/13/2022 7:54:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet. Congratulations! Christuraj.
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Date: 9/15/2022 4:40:00 AM
Oh, I can so relate-- I too hoped to 'change the world'-- but the world must save itself...yet even if a few read your work, it is an act of transcendence, and so a miracle. Great imagery here, as is the final couplet!
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Date: 9/14/2022 10:04:00 AM
Christuraj, Congratulations to you on being selected with this vastly superior sonnet. Powerful rhythms peak and trough, and smooth line transitions of course abound. I especially liked the following ; “Pigs know, before time, appearance of the earthquake, Crows caw before a guests steps in a little home; When an eagle can any sleeping person awake, Can't a poet, at-least, in his memories roam...?” A flawless gem. Thanks for your soupmail congratulating me. Howard
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Date: 9/14/2022 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement, Alex. Your poem is well penned.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/14/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 9/5/2022 7:45:00 PM
So clever and unique Christuraj ! I love the use of the animals ..their senses that feel things before us humans. Susan :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/6/2022 3:11:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 9/4/2022 4:57:00 PM
Creative entry for this contest, Christuraj. A good thought to think on also, my friend. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/1/2022 7:20:00 PM
I liked how you have approached the subject in a totally different way ! To choose the less trodden path, one needs courage and a spirit of innovation.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/4/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 9/1/2022 9:04:00 AM
~ celebrating aliveness ~
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/4/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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