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I Walked Through A Tunnel - Surrealism Poetry

I walked through a tunnel like a finger rubbing around the inside of a wine glass round and round fround bround vround tround round and round through the tunnel as a funnel speeding up kround zround jround pround I walked through a tunnel down to the darkness down and down bown hown rown zown down and down round and round dark and stark I walked through a tunnel to myself who wasn’t there

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Date: 9/30/2024 2:42:00 PM
Hello Clive Culverhouse, hi! so nice to meet you. i just read this poem. I like it. it sounds creepy. Enjoy your day my friend. /darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/1/2024 10:08:00 AM
Hello Clive Culverhouse, Your welcome. enjoy your daay my friend. /Darlene/
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/1/2024 12:20:00 AM
Thanks for reading Darlene, nice to meet you too
Date: 9/29/2024 6:38:00 AM
I love how immersive this is! Eek, I felt like I partook in hallucinogenics then :)
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/29/2024 6:53:00 AM
Funny you say that because when I read it I feel dizzy which doesn't help with my health at the moment haha

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