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I Open the Door and Cross the Threshold of Imagination

STROLLING PARADISE I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination. What i would do to hold your hand, and stroll along the beach tropical sun beams upon picturesque shores Dawning sun, ocean rays, blindingly reflecting flash. Our love can be seen clearly,as the ripening pineapples happiness felt,as the plain of day,sheer beauty in herself. Laying down,side by side,only sound waves lapping our feet. We drift into semi-concious,oblivious to the world. Awakened, by the chill that the sea air does give to see the huge sunset,sloping slowly into the ocean walking back,to what seems like reallity, people,shops,cars.The differance, a few hundred yards. ******************************************************************* MY PERFECT WAY A perfect life to me,just live in harmony no wars no conflict,religion against religion fighting rights, for your stance, to sell your ill needs please hear me when i say,do not path that way. Peace is so much easier,a longer life span to choose why go against the grain of life,you will only lose love being the intended,sends a warmth inside simplicity, family life, will fill your heart with pride. ******************************************************************* THE BEAUTY THAT CAN GIVE ..... Giving a bunch of lillys,each day a mundane change from smile and appreciation, to vasing its boquet each morning the opening,o seems so very slow little by little expanding cherished beauty. Until the day,nature really has took course semi-opened bulbs kissing the reef like leaves. On a full scaled blossom,open armed pettles beauty at natures highest,pleasure for the eye. ` Paul Beadnall for Constance La France. A rambling poet. Contest .." 3 GEMS.. 1/8/11 `

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Date: 8/2/2011 1:14:00 AM
Creative and Lovely!!! Best of Luck in the Contest!!!!!
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/2/2011 1:22:00 AM
Thanks very much Chiquita for your kind words,always appreciated.. blessings Paul
Date: 8/1/2011 3:02:00 PM
this was creative and imaginative nicely done good luck in the contest cory
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/1/2011 4:13:00 PM
Thanks very much,Cory.Always appreciated.. Blessings
Date: 8/1/2011 11:31:00 AM
wow Paul a wondrous write broken into stages ..magnificent presentation luv with exhilarating words of expression... good luck in the contest..luv..
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/1/2011 11:43:00 AM
Thanks very much Linda-Marie,kind words blessings Paul
Date: 8/1/2011 8:32:00 AM
a lovely poem, with a poignant last line i like this
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/1/2011 11:42:00 AM
Cheers mate for your kind words. Blessings Paul
Date: 8/1/2011 7:38:00 AM
paul, i sink into your impressions so lithe and definitely dreamy... i likey lots.. winne1 :) huggs, nette
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/1/2011 11:40:00 AM
Thanks very much for your kind comments,Nette.. Blessings Paul

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