I looked into your golden eyes and was left astonished

I looked into your golden eyes and was left astonished,
Transfixed, trying to drink in more of their deep beauty,
Your intimate gaze pierced through me, and, oh God, I was dizzy,
Their sunlit brilliance, with streaks of green and gold confetti,
A beauty that consumes me, in love, in ecstasy, under your spell,
Over my senses, you were like magic appearing when least expected,
Leaving a deep imprint on my soul, a taste that craves more,
Even after you've gone, I remain captive in the hypnotic mirror of your gaze,
You were like a mirage, a moment of eternity that took my breath away,
And now, though you're no longer here, I'm caught in the memory of your eyes,
That light which changed my world, a spell that never fades,
A dream from which I don't want to wake, even in your absence,
Your eyes, a gateway to a universe of desire and pure fascination,
Were an encounter with magic, a spark of eternity in a blink,
And though you are gone, I still live in their spell, seeking that light,
In every sunrise and sunset, yearning for that radiance that enchanted me.

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Date: 2/15/2025 3:17:00 PM
Hello Dan Enache, such a beauttiful poem about love. A bit sad because she passed. Yet still a beautiful poem. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/16/2025 4:26:00 PM
Hello Dan, How are you today? You are very welcome. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Dan Enache
Date: 2/15/2025 5:32:00 PM
Thank you so much !
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