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I knew it was over

I knew it was over when I started waiting more, Talking to me became to you just like a mundane chore. I knew it was over when your texts got shortened, Our fights became usual, and I kept feeling frightened. I knew it was over when you found another choice, How happily you told me about his compliments twice. I knew it was over when you started getting distant, I tried holding on the rope, but resistance was resistant. I knew it was over when you began to disappear, The moment I feared was suddenly near. I knew it when reassurances fell flat at times, Hollow words, redundant phrases, and overused rhymes. I knew you were gone, even when you were very near, Presence means nothing without love, without care. I knew it was over when your eyes lost their spark, The distance kept on growing, leaving its mark. I knew it when with you, I felt so alone, I had said you Goodbye long before you were gone.

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Date: 7/13/2024 3:28:00 PM
Hello Simon Akhtar, so nice to meet you. Your better offr without her. enjoy your evening my cfriend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2024 10:31:00 AM
Hello Simon, I will. It is nice to meet you. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Simon Akhtar
Date: 7/13/2024 9:41:00 PM
Thank You so much, Darlene:) Stay happiest ?
Date: 7/13/2024 8:38:00 AM
Nice poem. It flows well. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing. Expression is the best give we poets have. It provides catharsis in moments of pain or hurt.
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Simon Akhtar
Date: 7/13/2024 9:42:00 PM
Thank You so much for kind words:) Means a loy Phillip. :))

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