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I Dozed Off Drunk

I dozed off drunk and had a strange dream, Two people are fighting in my inner realm One wanted to sleep, the other to piss, I told them with anger-" Be quiet, please" In the morning I found: - how they were a wise And which after fighting handpicked compromise.

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Date: 9/30/2017 10:46:00 AM

Good poem... Kudos dear. My correction is Why not write it this way Dossed off strong Had a strange dream...

Alex Klugman
Date: 9/30/2017 8:40:00 PM

And by the way, who is Kudos?

Alex Klugman
Date: 9/30/2017 8:35:00 PM

Thanks for the correction. I'm very interested in what's wrong with my version? I will be grateful. These translations of my poems from Russian. I have published two books of poetry. With thanks.