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I couldnt talk about it so I wrote a poem

One, two, three, four, five. Close eyes Deep breath Mind’s silent now. One, two, three, four, five. Open eyes Grass Fabric Tree Bird Sour Grounded now. One, two, three, four, five. Close eyes Deep breath Try again tomorrow.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/8/2024 9:58:00 PM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.