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Poetry/Free Verse/I Breathe Snow/Human Written
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1687-203-16
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, November 16, 2024
For the International Contest, I Breathe
Sponsor, Ink Empress, Judged 11/29/2024

FIRST PLACE

Image result for fantasy girl in the snow

"Snowflakes are kisses from heaven."

From writer _ Frida Kirkerge's, Book

I breathe snow ... in the forest where winter twilight is dense and full and the sky falls to a shadow as trees and ground blend and mingle ebbing into vagueness the path is wet beneath my feet and little frills of ice adorn things crystalline, frosty and filigree then, suddenly the air is full of snowflakes enchanting and fragile snow has come to be my beloved and I am left breathless with snow floating among the trees as I feel a sweet touch on my hair and on my cheeks with no sound except for a silent kiss I stand still in snows loving embrace in a frozen world quiet and tranquil except for my beloved whispering snow drifting, floating, hovering I whisper, I love you . . . but I know he will leave soon and become but another memory lost

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 11/29/2024 5:10:00 PM

This is so lovely Constance and the imagery took me right there :-) Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs and smiles. Anne xox

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2024 11:29:00 AM

Anne, thank you for the nice compliment, comment and congratulations, and hugs ~

John Read

Date: 11/29/2024 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations Constance on your contest win. xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2024 11:29:00 AM

John, thank you so much for the congratulations ~

Ann Peck

Date: 11/29/2024 9:45:00 AM

I love your poem, Constance. It's so soft and lovely. It makes me reconsider snow that I usually don't like :) Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2024 11:30:00 AM

Ann, thank you for the nice compliment, comment and congratulations, I love snow ~

Ink Empress

Date: 11/29/2024 1:42:00 AM

Dear constance, i love the way youv started the poem and how youv written one that is very captivating! I can feel the snowflakes and see through your descriptive and metaphorical writ which depicts do much in a very soulfully moving manner! The emotions flowing throughout this really made me feel so much! And also i loved the ending! Worthy of all the accolades. Congratulations on your first place!thank you for sharing this . Sending you light always

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2024 11:31:00 AM

Ink, thank you for the contest and my awesome win, and for the lovely compliment, comment and congratulations ~

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/17/2024 5:44:00 PM

I enjoy this verse. It has very lonely overtones. Fusing with snow seems to be a neutral escape from reality. Good luck with the contest. Your poem is enchanting.

Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2024 4:52:00 PM

Hilda, thank you for the compliment and comment, and encouragement, love Constance

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/16/2024 9:26:00 PM

snowflakes are just one set of marvelous God work! Wonderful poem!

Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2024 1:31:00 PM

AA, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings Constance

John Read

Date: 11/16/2024 9:46:00 AM

Lovely writing Constance, I do believe snowflakes are from heaven, sent down from someone we love. Xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2024 1:29:00 PM

John, thank you for the compliment and comment, blessings Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/16/2024 7:22:00 AM

Your "I breathe snow" is a lovely write with a great picture. Great memories are the best kind to have but some do get lost along the way. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2024 1:30:00 PM

Paula, thank you for the compliment on my poem and pic, and the comment, blessings, Constance

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/16/2024 5:45:00 AM

Constance this poem has a heartbeat of innocence and delightful wonder

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2024 1:30:00 PM

Frederic thank you so much for the nice comment, appreciate, blessings, Constance

Michael Tor

Date: 11/16/2024 5:14:00 AM

Love this one Constance. Snow has a calming soothing affect on the soul magnified with its beauty of of majestic white floating down in droplets of parachuting armies of beauty and amazement. For a while and it leaves and is, "but a memory Lost." Conveying sadly all good things come to an end. Wonderful poetry by you today Constance. Thank you for sharing and a big Hug for you...

Constance La France
Date: 11/16/2024 1:32:00 PM

Michael, thank you for the lovely comment, and compliment. I was born in a snow storm and have always felt a fascination with snow falling, I do fin it so soothing ad beautiful, hugs, Constance