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I breathe love

I breathe love, not the everyday one that's quick to flee. Just come close to inhale its sweetness, and savour its flavours. Then you will know that emotions can twirl, not on a dancing floor, but will sweep you off your feet and fly you like a kite. Just pull up a chair to share your cheers! Then your head will swirl. You'll walk in the clouds. Radiance will be painted on your face. As you discard the one you knew for my love, that's new.

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Date: 11/29/2024 3:57:00 AM
Dear MF, so nice to see you enter one of my contests and nice to read you too, this lovely and beautiful poem that depicts undying love in such a poetic manner; i love the flow of this and the opening lines: thank you for sharing: congratulations on your placement: sending you light always
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 11/29/2024 4:47:00 AM
Thanks for hosting the contest and I am also appreciative of this your nice comment and the time taken to write it. Much more importantly thanks for placing my poem on your winners' list.

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