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I Feel You

Sweetheart,the thoughts of you floods my mind. I long to hold,caress and love you always,but just can't because you are not here with me. In my minds eye,I can see your Pretty face as it glows than the Moon,shines brighter than the brightness of the Sun,and is clearer than the clarity of a Crystal. Your beauty gleams more than the glister of gemstones,and your dentition sparkles than the Snow-Capped Peak of a Mountain.Your eyes so dreamy and sexy,but with a cool mien like the Ocean.I still hear your laughter with that sweet sonorous voice,like a singing bird celebrating the dawn of a new day. I feel you sweetheart,I really do.

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Date: 2/11/2009 4:34:00 PM
Nice worked diminished by spelling errors.clarity sparkles mien Light & Love Debbie
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