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Written for the contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker " Bilocation" on line of enquiry written by Seeker "as an aspect of God indivisible from the whole presence ensouls feeble form to fulfil on earth its ordained role we recognise we are not the actor enacting the life drama in trance so we bilocate our awareness that joyful be soul’s dance" 

 
Listen to the shifting winds carrying musical meteors, there soars floating letters between lyrical lines, emanating runes that reflect revolving rhymes of faith within and beyond. For we are more than just spectators or actors, in this theatrical life, we are the assigned maestros of God orchestrating joy, through strings of interconnected instruments. In the midst of reality, when chaos knock on the glass doors of our thoughts, we unchain celestial portals, switching off scorpion-skinned sagas scattered along scorching hems of rainless deserts, to slumber within warm arms of intuitions, allowing eagle feathers dipped in lotus water to caress fragile psyche. Yet through roses-tinted lens of seasonal changes, we see greener blades of willows in yesterday, and smell roses sweeter than jasmines. While consciousness unveils glistening gardens, where trees stand taller. But to see the roots rushing with twinkling truth, should we let raspberry rain to cleanse foggy mists clouding our sight? As it is in darkness we find flickering fairy-lights guiding our third-eye to stroll in dual dimension, an astral realm, where spring-falls are the mirror to the heart of storms, there we wear an amethyst armor carved with seraphic hieroglyphics, from the holy manuscript that unravels a road to waltzing beneath aquamarine auroras, sprinkling ribboned bliss upon a home where hope is the blooming fragrance, curtained with dancing dreamcatchers. So remember, to connect with celestial rays to refocus and shift the last light within our anxious mind, as voices echo in rustic refrains, shackling inner-peace, while perspectives and rolls reversed, we’ll walk out of the closet that suffocates us, allowing karmic kismet to clothe us in divine jewels from cosmically connected comets. Perhaps, we are daydreamers, dressed in daffodils and dahlias, soul searching like wanderers on the quest of finding an alchemist within, to devise a mystical plan. As we’ve seen places that were never walked upon, where sands of life left footprints in the chakras of our soul, like emerald skies of déjà vu. Let this be us weaving whimsical tales within skin and bones, etched in sage for the eyes that place labels of lies on our cloak of solace. When mind drifts to an enchanting land, where the moon never phases while time turns fickle. This is the eternal escape from reality, a hydrangea hideaway, away from hills of hypocrisy.

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Date: 2/17/2024 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations Ink on your win.
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Date: 2/16/2024 9:36:00 AM
An excellent and provocative poem to meditate on. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/15/2024 10:21:00 PM
Tremendous! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/11/2024 1:01:00 AM
Life is not always smooth. Bitter realities keep tormenting us. But when we connect ourselves to a higher entity, we get the strength to navigate stormy seas. This poem is so powerful and beautiful with its emphasis on a power beyond human capabilities. "As it is in darkness we find flickering fairy-lights guiding our third-eye to stroll in dual dimension, an astral realm, where spring-falls are the mirror to the heart of storms, there we wear an amethyst armor carved with seraphic hieroglyphics" This armor will be our protection....! An enchanting poem with much positivity which gleams like astral lights....! I am sure this will secure a top placement. All the Best dear Empress !
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Date: 2/10/2024 11:34:00 PM
Beautiful Ink, this is such a heartfelt and evocative write that twirls in the dimension of soul-searching in an impeccable way! You've amazingly shown how we are more than puppetry of life and how we can find solitude within the flickers of faith that shimmer in our souls. Your wordplay is absolutely enchanting and many lines here made me go wow, especially "left footprints in the chakras of our soul,like emerald skies of déjà vu" Such profound descriptions here, absolutely stunning and vivid
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/10/2024 11:37:00 PM
"But to see the roots rushing with twinkling truth, should we let raspberry rain to cleanse foggy mists clouding our sight?" Thought-provoking and meaningful essence you've described within elegant descriptions and wordsmithery.. Love this so much!! You've captured that essence of bilocation beautifully in this write.. Best wishes for the contest, keep writing and shining always!
Date: 2/10/2024 6:05:00 PM
Parts of this well written poem remind me of St. Barbara, who was said to bilocate. As I bilocate at the entire poem I look at the door of the last stanza at the moment.
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Date: 2/9/2024 12:42:00 PM
Whoah- a piece that leaves me breathless and my mind, spinning. Two realities, you know, I've never quite put it that way, and I learned something today. Love "emerald skies of déjà vu" and a place where "moon never phases" and time's 'fickleness". Dear soul, let no one mock your gift. You are dear to us, Ink. <3
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Date: 2/8/2024 1:30:00 PM
This is an astounding poem Ink. Every word holds a deep pour. "we’ll walk out of the closet that suffocates us" numerous walk outs we'll need because everyday comes with lots of chaos, however one day, we will have a deep laughter where our smiles knows no flickering. Much love.
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Date: 2/8/2024 12:39:00 PM
Dear Ink, your work is undeniably a work of genius and, in my opinion, a triumph. Right from the beginning, you effortlessly conjure up a realm of awe-inspiring visuals and profound introspection. It serves as both a profound philosophical expedition and an eloquent choreography. You skillfully illustrate the interconnection with a force beyond our existence, the capacity to surpass the boundaries of personal perception and access a collective awareness.
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Date: 2/8/2024 4:27:00 AM
Another splendid write from you, my friend--adorned in metaphors and power of your vocabulary.--So remember, to connect with celestial rays to refocus and shift the last light within ---When mind drifts to an enchanting land, where the moon never phases while time turns fickle--shining brilliantly in your poetic prowess, Ink.
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Date: 2/7/2024 10:31:00 PM
Your poetic words carry us through time and space with eloquent imagery and with a heartfelt passion, refuse to let the chaos of the world diminish the depth of your hope for the enchanted land where the moon never phases, and solace resides. A beautiful entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! Love and Light, Bill
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Date: 2/7/2024 6:20:00 PM
Soul searching and the quest to heal while healing others is so beautifully dealt with here. I'm always stunned by how you take us to different landscapes and immerse us in such vivid experiences through your words. Always a pleasure to read you, hun. Your words indeed are a 'cloak of solace' taking us through 'an enchanting land', a true escape from the mundanity and banality of a two- faced world! Keep writing and shining always, hun! Best wishes for this contest!
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Date: 2/7/2024 2:01:00 PM
I have to get back down to earth after reading, which was very pleasurable. I'd some it up this way...we have to let our imagination reach into all of our experience and (like an alchemist) make something worthwhile. If we can be kind to others and ourselves, what a gift for all.
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/11/2024 9:49:00 AM
sum it up
Date: 2/7/2024 12:49:00 PM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Bilocation" write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 2/7/2024 11:06:00 AM
A most interesting take on the contest.. Your poem is a profound journey through the introspection and spirituality, exploring the depths of the human experience and the mysteries of existence. The imagery evoked by the shifting winds and musical meteors sets a surreal backdrop for the exploration of faith, interconnectedness, and the role of individuals as maestros in the grand orchestration of life. Your metaphors are excellent as always ...
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2024 11:07:00 AM
As the poem unfolds, it encourages you to embrace our inner daydreamer and embark on a quest for self-realisation and alchemical transformation. The imagery of emerald skies of déjà vu and sands of life leaving footprints in the chakras of the soul speaks to the cyclical nature of existence and the eternal search for meaning.
Date: 2/7/2024 9:32:00 AM
on our cloak of solace. this is from whence all good stories start, love
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Date: 2/7/2024 7:24:00 AM
Beautiful length this piece have aeee papi… my phone took a min to load… XD.. Listen to the shifting winds carrying musical meteors, I listening .. all I hear is my stomach growling!!! let raspberry rain to cleanse foggy mists clouding our sight?.. in darkness we find flickering fairy-lights.. amethyst armor carved with seraphic hieroglyphics,.. ur words come alive through ur piece.. voices echo in rustic refrains, oooo.. hydrangea hideaway, away from hills of hypocrisy. Gorgeous ending papi <3
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2024 8:53:00 AM
Lol thanks papi! You da best for reading this lengthy poem! Haha
Date: 2/7/2024 7:19:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress: truly a masterpiece and, in my book, a winner. From the very first line you create a world of breathtaking images and exploration. It's both a philosophical journey and a lyrical dance. You show the connection to something greater than ourselves, the ability to transcend the limited perspective of the individual and tap into a universal consciousness.
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2024 8:02:00 AM
Wow you really understood my poem thank you so much for reading and for leaving such a heartfelt and sincere comment i am truly grateful for your poetic support
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 2/7/2024 7:19:00 AM
The way you describe this shift, with "unchaining celestial portals" and "eagle feathers dipped in lotus water," is simply magical. But what truly elevates your poem is the unwavering presence of hope. Your words have a deep sense of optimism, for even amidst chaos and doubt, there is a path to joy and connection. Ink E, Your poem is a treasure trove of beauty, depth, and inspiration. It will stay with me for a long time to come! – Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/7/2024 7:13:00 AM
I’m most of the time in this moment . Well written . By the way do people read such long poems?
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2024 7:20:00 AM
Hhaha soupers do. Most of them: i got carried awwy

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