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Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows: 1. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) 2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. 4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting. 5. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1 Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

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Written on March 4, 2024

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Resting in your shadow I’m moved to love completely, devoted to you Don’t let go Two who are one Together, each storm we’ll come through Homespun Our vow Time can’t undo Wow! Resting in your shadow Together, each storm we’ll come through Wow!

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Sotto Poet

Date: 4/7/2024 11:43:00 AM

Your heartfelt love poetry was a joy to read, Regina. Words spoken from the depths of your soul reverberate with the truth—many congratulations on winning the contest. And thanks for dropping by my page.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/7/2024 9:59:00 AM

Delightful minichu Gina. Congratulations! :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/6/2024 5:07:00 PM

Lovely <3 'Resting in your shadow Together, each storm we’ll come through' reminds me of my marriage, my hubby and I have been through sunshine and storms of this life. I cannot imagine weathering them alone, I love him so much.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/4/2024 5:52:00 AM

Ah, the Minichu form, you’ve done this one so well!