Humanity

His goal was pleasure For others' pain never cared Humanity lost! © Demetrios Trifiatis 28 March 2017

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Gary Bateman

Date: 3/28/2017 10:16:00 AM

Demetrios, A very true statement and message, and very well-expressed. Excellent Write!! A SEVEN!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2017 10:40:00 AM

Es freut mich sehr dich viender sehen mein freund Gary! What a lovely surprise my friend. Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment!

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/28/2017 9:08:00 AM

Lost himself too ... Great write ... A7 ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2017 10:33:00 AM

Unfortunately true my dear Probir! Thank you my good friend!

Chris Green

Date: 3/28/2017 6:10:00 AM

A very well crafted Haiku with a great message.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2017 10:32:00 AM

Thank you so much dear, Chris! So kind of you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2017 4:25:00 AM

7 !

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2017 5:49:00 AM

Merci mon amie!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2017 4:24:00 AM

- An ego person, without heart and emotions - Great written, my friend - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2017 5:48:00 AM

Well put my dearest, Anne- Lise. Thank you for your lovely visit, comment and grading. Hugs!

White Wolf

Date: 3/28/2017 1:37:00 AM

Very poignant, Demetrios! A top notch haiku mate!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/28/2017 5:46:00 AM

So kind of you to visit dear WW. Thank you!