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Another example for the physics laws contest
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Newton's Laws of Motion
First Law (Inertia): An object at rest stays at rest, and an object in motion stays in motion unless acted upon by an external force.
Third Law: For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction.
I have no faith that I'm gravitationally bound
so I will myself stock still
until I can bear it no longer
static builds until
every
atom
is itching for movement
the world presented to me becomes frictionless
within it I'm realised
amazed my feet print the ground
my fingers trace the textures
of the alternate space
I interact, am rewarded -
my God I can breathe!
I dare not pause to doubt my existence
there will be time enough when still again
the forces that push me so effortlessly now
will be a weight that sits predictably on my shoulders
I'll consider it then
even in a simulation, laws apply
with a consequence
to thinking and doing
being - only happening in bursts
when the controlled environment
experiences flux
I know the trade winds that set me free will also slam shut the door
I'm wish to forget
how the stamps on my hand
that let me pass
now crush my bones
there is no force left within me to push back
I cannot take shape
in a vacuum
I bleat what seems sense
yet it just echoes back
gets silenced in the spaces between my heart beats
the soundless pockets will blow out my eardrums
unless i reset how it feels to stay put
being contained is neither equal or opposite to inexistence
the breeze ceases to ask or answer
and trusts wholly in the fact:
laws are meant to be obeyed
Copyright © Di11y Da11y | Year Posted 2025
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