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Human Rights For Contest

That day the army came to our village And ravaged every part of it with terror I held my baby sister, blood soaked,as she took her last breath Dad died in the battle lines trying to protect our family Mother and my two brothers managed to escape I was recruited into the army with many other boys my age Eventually I got up the ranks of a captain I still fight the war that I don't understand, I still fight the war that's me August 20 2015

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Lewis Nyaga

Date: 8/21/2015 11:46:00 PM

Great pen Njeri, on war and violations of basic human dignity brought by war... a war is like a wild fire once started its hard to contain ****Shalom peace

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:43:00 PM

very true. thank you Lewis

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/21/2015 11:05:00 AM

An emotive write, Njeri. The voice of someone who never really got to have grip of his identity and the principle he stands for. Good one!

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:43:00 PM

sadly its a story of many kids whose countries have been affected by years of war. thank you Kim

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/20/2015 10:38:00 PM

the war from within....will truly never end....until we understandingly begin....to know that it is simply sin....

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:42:00 PM

very true. thank you Eric

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/20/2015 10:06:00 PM

Very moving! Which war are you thinking about in particular. Sad scenarios like this are all too common in today's world. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:41:00 PM

a few years ago I watched a Ugandan documentary. I think the title was unconventional war about child soldiers and other social issues. so the documentary inspired my write in this contest. thank you Mathew