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Date written: 04/06/2025

Sad surprise awaits Juliette. She walks into her house to find new rescue, Hugo, ripping the living room apart. Bad doggie! Very, very bad doggie!

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/8/2025 8:06:00 PM

Love how you nailed the imagery in these few lines. Awesome write!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/8/2025 8:21:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pace:-)

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/8/2025 7:07:00 AM

LOL. My new puppy loves to tear things apart. He is in puppy class, but that hasn't stopped him on that. Great poem :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/8/2025 2:56:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi:-) Be patient with him. Separation anxiety brings out the worst in puppies, lol. Their cuteness is such that they get away with bad behavior every time!

David Crandall

Date: 4/7/2025 8:31:00 PM

haha, good one! :-) bad Hugo!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/8/2025 3:01:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, David:-) I'm glad you liked this one.