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Hourglass of Love

lucky as the stars I felt, when I was with you I was never blue blessed beyond compare when we lived our lives as two every day was new the years went by swift like sand through an hourglass one grain at a time charmed as if we were born under a lucky star you and I adored the God that placed us under heavenly accord as one heart two souls lucky as the stars I felt, when I was with you I was never blue

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Date: 10/5/2023 3:29:00 AM
Very touching. I could feel all the emotion.
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:12:00 PM
What an exquisite poem. Your words are crafted so gracefully, my dear friend. These verses are truly enchanting, and I can envision your unwavering dedication to each one. Thanks for your uplifting visit to my page.
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:20:00 AM
Devotion, passion and a coupling that is felt by all through your beautiful words dear Mystic Rose! I especially love ~ as one heart two souls. Big hugs. Susan :)
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:19:00 AM
WoW! Mystic, You’ve penned such a well-written string “Senryus”. Love was expressed in each one. Blessed is the one who finds such a love as this! Excellent job. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/23/2023 8:26:00 AM
This is such a gorgeous chain of senryu, how beautifully you've painted the wish of a love which blossoms as 'one heart two souls' and never proves to be blue.. Love the flow here and the enchanting ambience, so creative :) A FAV definitely!
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:58:00 AM
A FAV for my list, Rose. Your Senryu love poem was magnificent. A blessed union of two souls with one heart. Thanks for sharing from your personal experience with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:16:00 AM
Such sweet romance and pure love in your words Rose! A beautiful poem….Debx
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:06:00 AM
These are lovely and i can see your devotion in them all..
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:59:00 AM
The opening and closing stanzas say LOVE! Lovely bookends to a lovely poem, Vienna.
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:55:00 AM
Ah what a blissful feeling it is to be in love with one that makes you feel home and never blue. I love the flow of this so seamless and the way you’ve expressed is so catchy! Love this poem! Made me smile
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:31:00 AM
Awww who wouldn't fall in love with this series of loving senryus Rose. I hope it's true for you
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