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Hope fuels the desire that burns within your longing heart and soul. And yet loneliness soon returns, levying a heartbreaking toll. When passion's flame gets doused by tears, anxiety leaves you nauseous. And as doubt manifests as fears, lust circumvents being cautious. Happiness morphs into teardrops within a world where wishes die. For the lying, just never stops, and fledgling hearts need trust to fly. The moth and flame begin their waltz; though courting death, she will expire. Enamored, she's blind to fire's faults; for desire burns hotter than fire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/13/2018 10:21:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 11/16/2015 2:07:00 PM
Such a beautifully, intriguing write with a lot of class Emile!....:), jill
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Date: 11/16/2015 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Jill, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 11/16/2015 10:35:00 AM
Emile, this is sizzling with passion and dripping with romantic emotions! Love it so much - it's a 7! BRAVO! Pandita
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Date: 11/16/2015 11:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Pandita, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.

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