Hot Summers Day

"You're not allowed to play in the canal"
words echoed through my head
as I sat in the middle if it,
cooling my all in the churning water.

Happy faces surrounded me
on this way out hot day.
Rules went by the board 
in this street canal, open to nature.

Adults stood milling around envious of our audacity.
splashing them in play.
They, pretending to be annoyed
yet enjoying the coolness.

All went well til the daylight dimmed,
time to stand up and be counted,
clothes were sopping wet, but the 
smile on our faces say, it was worth it.

Temporarily ignoring the fact rodents and others
called the canal home, ,
Hopefully, not many of the children
will end up with a rash or worse.


Was a hot summers day
When children came to play..........

Penned 27 August 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/30/2017 11:49:00 AM
Great imagery, and the photo goes so well! :)
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Date: 8/28/2017 8:40:00 AM
They look so happy...lovely painting you created of the scene with your words
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Date: 8/28/2017 5:45:00 AM
Good depiction of the scene in the picture--good luck for the contest!
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