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October 17, 2023

"How are you feeling today" - one-liner 2 Poetry Contest

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Every day mind facing challenge to reach unattainable moon, queen of starlit sky, gleaming to inspire.

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Date: 10/19/2023 1:13:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win with your lovely write. I enjoyed reading it again. Never give up hope. Have a blessed/great day writing away.....
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Date: 10/19/2023 11:51:00 AM
Always keep the faith.. Congratulations on your placement.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/19/2023 12:44:00 PM
Thank you. Appreciate the placement.
Date: 10/17/2023 1:01:00 PM
A lovely write. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck"... Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/19/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. Look forward to reading yours.
Date: 10/17/2023 10:54:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Mala :) - (How do you really feel, did you get corona too ?) - hugs
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Date: 10/17/2023 11:45:00 AM
- Autumn is time for "crap" ... stay well you too my friend :) - I hope you reach the moon :) - <3 and hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2023 11:34:00 AM
I might say “oh crap! Another doctor’s appointment?” Ha ha ha! But this is true too! Hope to reach the Moon, in a very short time! Love, Dear Friend. Stay well.
Date: 10/17/2023 8:15:00 AM
A good description. Well done.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2023 8:26:00 AM
I feel so assured with your comment, Jeanette! Thank you, Dear Poet.
Date: 10/17/2023 7:40:00 AM
Oh wow, this is so beautiful and thoughtful dear poetess, I absolutely love the idea of expressing the desire to reach the unattainable.. Really something that can ignite the fire for living life and enjoying its essence. I also love how you've described the moon as queen of starlit sky! Wowww.. An inspiring and eloquent poem, reflecting hope.. Love this, best of luck for the contest :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2023 7:44:00 AM
Wow, Hiya! Silent One is a such a great sponsor who inspires everybody. I am inspired by all of my friends and new talented sisters here. Thank you for commenting. I actually didn't even enter the one-liner for contest. Love and Hugs ~ Mala

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