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Honestly

When you think you heard it all Oh contraire Its only the beginning If I must say So deceiving The way things look I believe nothing Not even in a book What's real Anymore People lie so good Truth hurts But words are misunderstood The world is getting better Or is it worse My kids will know this story But first I must rehearse It becomes so unique Then its not You hear words like fleek Then you tie the knot Who made this up You ain't hot Mediocre things The game will never change You write in history It remains the same You think you made new But truly Its just old news

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Skat A

Date: 3/20/2016 10:59:00 PM

Hello Elexus, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2016 11:28:00 PM

Elexus, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2016 11:27:00 PM

So true, nice to read this one again. LINDA (you have it twice.) LINDA

Karissa Kelley

Date: 3/19/2016 8:04:00 PM

I love your analogies and the way you express yourself, beautifully written and makes one think. Xx