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Hold On

Holding on to what he'd got he could not reach out for more And it took so much to just hold on naught was left in the store

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/9/2023 2:28:00 PM
Poor guy. There seems to actually be a lot of that going on today, sadly.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/9/2023 2:30:00 PM
Hold, please .... ~ Eternity passes
Date: 5/8/2023 8:47:00 PM
He may have bitten off a little more than he could chew.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/9/2023 2:31:00 PM
He was aiming for the stars, but wound up inhaling CO2 emissions. lol. ~ gw

Book: Shattered Sighs