hitchhiker

"That was a hitchhiker" just a line on TV as I passed through I started thinking about cuckoo hitchhikers, parasites none the same a spiral of thoughts, little hooks that join I mean no judgement even the parasite plays a crucial role so much happens as lines cross as we interact perhaps rationed, time limited barely cognisant sometimes about what just occurred

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Mat Ignacio

Date: 3/3/2024 7:26:00 PM

i like the way you connect your ideas in this and the timing and feel of your phrasings -

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/3/2024 11:20:00 PM

Nice of you to say so Mat. If poetry is anything it is an insight into thoughts - it's interesting to observe what people put together - for me anyway. Thank you for stopping by

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/3/2024 5:34:00 AM

Wow, your poem so beautifully captures the intricate web of connections and interactions that shape our lives. The simple mention of a hitchhiker on TV sparks reflections on the nature of relationships and the roles we play in each other’s lives. You have evoked a sense of interconnectedness, where every encounter leaves an indelible mark, whether as symbiotic support or parasitic burden. Yes, your empathy shines through, acknowledging the complexities of human interaction with humility and understanding. This is an exquisite introspective journey through the threads of existence. - Blessings, Daniel

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/3/2024 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Daniel, sometimes things just jump out and need writing about. I should take more time I'm sure - but I liked the ideas that instantly linked together for this one. Glad you appreciated what I was aiming for. Thank you for your kind words