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His Victory Was Her Defeat

She had just turned around to face him, life of lies, life of sin, her mouth open to voice her suspicions, but she felt the intermissions, her mind’s eye filling with fear, she couldn’t confront him, she wouldn’t dare. He was abusive as he did what he pleased, her life was difficult, his was a breeze, his dark intense gaze, controlled her, and brought her down to a new phase, depression settled in, it was always all about him, she would always consume his fire, take his heat, and his victory was her defeat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/20/2009 4:14:00 PM
this is a very realistic write, I can attest to living this is my past, in order for people like myself to find their own victory is to search their heart, find one's self as I struggle and write to try to do this, lovely poems like this touch me so much. Thanks alot for sharing thiswell written and conveyed piece. Love, Lucinda
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