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His Soul

Out of the corner of my eye I see you, you were looking at me And I also see The boy or the man I wished you to be. Out of the corner of my eye I see the boy who melt my heart Every little kind word, makes my day Every tiny push, breaks us apart. Out of the corner of my eye I see the grown-up man Every great word, every promise He makes, he breaks, out of plan. Coz out of the corner of my eye I bade him goodbye I didn’t want his words, his touch I want his soul, his heart – and nothing much.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/9/2015 4:09:00 AM
Thank you all so much! Took me more than a year to log back in and all the comments are overwhelming. Forever grateful.
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Date: 1/10/2015 10:26:00 PM
Cherie, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Cherie Gozon
Date: 6/9/2015 4:08:00 AM
sorry took me a while to get back on PS. Thanks for the comment. Really appreciate it.
Date: 1/6/2015 4:44:00 PM
I Hoppe you do touch his soul good job
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Date: 12/20/2013 12:08:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Cherie !!! - Greetings to you from Norway: Wish you and everyone you love a enjoyable Christmas. - I hope the year 2014 will be a lovely and peaceful year.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/19/2013 5:59:00 PM
Cherie...you write soooo good! His Soul is different...with a hint of mystery. Peace, chuck
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Date: 12/16/2013 9:59:00 AM
a true love if let go, once its yours will return to you... a nice piece
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Date: 12/16/2013 5:02:00 AM
Lovely expressions on love, with a refrain, cherie
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