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Hickery Dickery

a clock is ticking as a mouse climbs up the chain at one the mouse falls

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Deborah Burch

Date: 4/26/2012 6:51:00 AM

Very clever!!! lol :) Well Done Terry!! I love it!!love,deb

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 4/15/2012 2:41:00 PM

A haiku that captures the essence of the nursery rhyme...good work.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/15/2012 2:49:00 PM

I was having fun with this one. Thought it might catch a few off guard with an almost forgotten nursery rhyme. Hope you found it a bit of fun. Thanks for your kind review.

John Rhinem

Date: 4/15/2012 2:38:00 PM

Smile ˜ Like Lightning, Falling From Heaven ˜ Love Always, John!:) *

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/15/2012 3:12:00 PM

To me this was my little joke and a bit of fun. In the true sense of Haiku this is not a proper Haiku but like a bad child I couldn't resist. With many it will be like a light going on either at the end of reading this or a bit after.Thanks for the kind review.