Get Your Premium Membership
Member Area
Soup Social
Member Poems
Member Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Poetry Resources
Home » Poems » Margarita Lillico » Hell No

Hell No

I dread that day of doom as living curse, When my self destructive sin of desire - Insatiable, get cast out from this earth - And burn my soul in hellish scorching fire. Shall I indulge in pleasures, rich and rife, Or question if sin's worth my afterlife?! For my sin's absolution now I pray, Tempting, taunting sensations I repel. One last time, my last wish, on my last day - My last word upon last breath - No To Hell! Wondering if complacency and sins, Paired by devil's evil as conjoined twins. March 6, 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 3/24/2023 5:51:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
We must remember that the Lord is all-forgiving...at least that's what the nuns taught us. I hope they were right! ;)
Login to Reply
Johnson Avatar
Robert Johnson
Date: 3/8/2023 8:47:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Delving into the yes and no. Begins the question of what we know. Beyond the emptiness of soullessness. It's only answered when we're gone. I guess.
Login to Reply
Turner Avatar
Daniel Turner
Date: 3/6/2023 2:27:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
If everyone questioned, "is sin worth my afterlife" I think there would be less sin. The only way the devil can get inside is if you let him in. Good one, Maggie. A little dark for you but I like it:)
Login to Reply
Lillico Avatar
Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 9:15:00 AM
block poet
Wasn’t dark enough:)
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/6/2023 11:08:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Love the title, I'm struggling with this one!
Login to Reply
Da11y Avatar
Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/6/2023 12:21:00 PM
block poet
I'm sure you will with time! (Cracked concept that is!)
Lillico Avatar
Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/6/2023 12:16:00 PM
block poet
Our daily struggle:) I cannot come up with Cracked concept..
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2023 10:17:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
I really enjoyed your write. I am with you, "My last word upon last breath - No To Hell!" Have a heavenly day writing away..................
Login to Reply
Lillico Avatar
Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/6/2023 12:18:00 PM
block poet
Thank you Paula, these contests bring up the darkest imagination I thought I didn’t possess.

Book: Shattered Sighs