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in heat of passion why did he kiss me on lips? melting white snow on my face in love or for warmth? to stop my teeth chattering? only beating hearts will know Written 15 July 2021 Ni (2) Katuata contest William Kekaula sponsored 577,577, PS syllable counter

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/16/2021 9:48:00 AM

Lovely and exhilarating. God bless you. Love, Gina

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/16/2021 12:30:00 PM

Thanks Gina!:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2021 12:47:00 PM

- ... this kiss was really hot, Krish :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/15/2021 1:02:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise! enjoy the summer heat!:)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/15/2021 11:47:00 AM

Hello Kirsh, a beautiful love romantic poem. i like the way you Enjoy your day my friend.used cold and hot.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2021 3:17:00 PM

Hello Krish, you are welcome my friend. enjoyyour evening my friend.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/15/2021 11:54:00 AM

Darlene, my dear, thank you so much! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/15/2021 11:17:00 AM

Very, very nicely stated Krish! I think William will like this love poem. I know I do! Wonderful, visceral imagery of cold and hot! Best wishes for the contest.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/15/2021 11:54:00 AM

Thanks Sam! Great to hear from you! Hope you are well!:)